Sophie,
Some very good work to date which puts you clearly into the top grade boundary for your research and planning work to date. I have added a few comments for some improvements and changes that I think you should make and this will help to secure this grade.
Please look at the mood boards - I have suggested that you separate out the image and text to make it easier - do speak to me if you are unsure about what I mean. Also, the target audience and advertisers mood boards should be separate posts.
You still have quite a few posts for the planning work and these are things that I want to you finalise over the Xmas holidays.
You must have rough sketches in pencil/paper form - I know you have block layouts in Photoshop but you need to show your initial ideas in sketch form.
Initial ideas post needs to be embedded directly from Prezi.
Very good work to date and your magazine is really coming on - I am confident you can achieve a top grade boundary mark for your coursework if you maintain this standard. Well done!
Carl.
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